Re: [PATCH] Documentation: remove duplicate cleanups

From: Paolo Ornati
Date: Thu Jun 29 2006 - 10:07:53 EST


On Thu, 29 Jun 2006 14:35:39 +0100
Alistair John Strachan <s0348365@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:

> Actually the context made me think otherwise, look:
>
> "Otherwise, statistics (average think time, average seek distance) on **the**
> process that submitted the just completed.."

"the process" and "that process" are in two different periods, doesn't
it matter?

Otherwise,
statistics (average think time, average seek distance) on **the process**
that submitted the just completed request are examined**.** If it seems
-likely that **that process** will submit another request soon, and that

In the second period "that process" refers clearly to "the process"
defined in the first period, while "process" looks pretty generic.

No?

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Paolo Ornati
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