Re: [PATCH] Documentation: cxl: fix typos and improve clarity in memory-devices.rst

[ALOK TIWARI]

Thanks Gregory,

On 02-06-2025 05:00, Gregory Price wrote:
> On Sat, May 31, 2025 at 12:51:58AM -0700, Alok Tiwari wrote:
> > This patch corrects several typographical issues and improves phrasing
> > in memory-devices.rst:
> >
> > - Fixes duplicate word ("1 one") and adjusts phrasing for clarity.
> > - Adds missing hyphen in "on-device".
> > - Corrects "a give memory device" to "a given memory device".
> > - fix singular/plural "decoder resource" -> "decoder resources".
> > - Clarifies "spans to Host Bridges" -> "spans two Host Bridges".
> >
> > These changes improve readability and accuracy of the documentation.
> >
> > Signed-off-by: Alok Tiwari <alok.a.tiwari@xxxxxxxxxx>
> > ---
> >   Documentation/driver-api/cxl/memory-devices.rst | 12 ++++++------
> >   1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
> >
> > diff --git a/Documentation/driver-api/cxl/memory-devices.rst b/Documentation/driver-api/cxl/memory-devices.rst
> > index d732c42526df..e9e2952a967d 100644
> > --- a/Documentation/driver-api/cxl/memory-devices.rst
> > +++ b/Documentation/driver-api/cxl/memory-devices.rst
> > @@ -29,8 +29,8 @@ Platform firmware enumerates a menu of interleave options at the "CXL root port"
> >   (Linux term for the top of the CXL decode topology). From there, PCIe topology
> >   dictates which endpoints can participate in which Host Bridge decode regimes.
> >   Each PCIe Switch in the path between the root and an endpoint introduces a point
> > -at which the interleave can be split. For example platform firmware may say at a
> > -given range only decodes to 1 one Host Bridge, but that Host Bridge may in turn
> > +at which the interleave can be split. For example, platform firmware may say at a
>                                                                                  ^^^^
> If you wouldn't mind, can you also change:                           "at a"  - >  "a"

I will replace "at a" with "a"

> Otherwise
>
> Reviewed-by: Gregory Price <gourry@xxxxxxxxxx>


Thanks,
Alok