Re: [PATCH V2] docs: livepatch: Fix a typo and remove the unnecessary gaps in a sentence

[Petr Mladek]

On Fri 2021-03-05 11:00:10, Joe Lawrence wrote:
> On 3/5/21 8:37 AM, Bhaskar Chowdhury wrote:
> > On 12:56 Fri 05 Mar 2021, Matthew Wilcox wrote:
> > > On Fri, Mar 05, 2021 at 03:39:23PM +0530, Bhaskar Chowdhury wrote:
> > > > s/varibles/variables/
> > > > 
> > > > ...and remove leading spaces from a sentence.
> > > 
> > > What do you mean 'leading spaces'?  Separating two sentences with
> > > one space or two is a matter of personal style, and we do not attempt
> > > to enforce a particular style in the kernel.
> > > 
> > The spaces before the "In" .. nor I am imposing anything , it was peter caught
> > and told me that it is hanging ..move it to the next line ..so I did. ..
> > 
> 
> Initially I thought the same as Matthew, but after inspecting the diff I
> realized it was just a line wrap.  Looks fine to me.
> 
> > > >   Sometimes it may not be convenient or possible to allocate shadow
> > > >   variables alongside their parent objects.  Or a livepatch fix may
> > > > -require shadow varibles to only a subset of parent object instances.  In
> > > > +require shadow variables to only a subset of parent object instances.
> > > 
> > > wrong preposition, s/to/for/    ..where???
> 
> Hi Bhaskar,
> 
> Thanks for spotting, I'd be happy with v2 as is or a v3 if you want to
> update s/shadow variables to only/shadow variables for only/  but knowing
> me, I probably repeated the same phrasing elsewhere.  Up to you, thanks.

I could fix these when pushing unless anyone is against it.

> Acked-by: Joe Lawrence <joe.lawrence@xxxxxxxxxx>

Acked-by: Petr Mladek <pmladek@xxxxxxxx>

Best Regards,
Petr