Re: [PATCH V2] docs: livepatch: Fix a typo and remove the unnecessary gaps in a sentence

From: Joe Lawrence
Date: Fri Mar 05 2021 - 11:00:55 EST


On 3/5/21 8:37 AM, Bhaskar Chowdhury wrote:
On 12:56 Fri 05 Mar 2021, Matthew Wilcox wrote:
On Fri, Mar 05, 2021 at 03:39:23PM +0530, Bhaskar Chowdhury wrote:
s/varibles/variables/

...and remove leading spaces from a sentence.

What do you mean 'leading spaces'? Separating two sentences with
one space or two is a matter of personal style, and we do not attempt
to enforce a particular style in the kernel.

The spaces before the "In" .. nor I am imposing anything , it was peter caught
and told me that it is hanging ..move it to the next line ..so I did. ..


Initially I thought the same as Matthew, but after inspecting the diff I realized it was just a line wrap. Looks fine to me.

Sometimes it may not be convenient or possible to allocate shadow
variables alongside their parent objects. Or a livepatch fix may
-require shadow varibles to only a subset of parent object instances. In
+require shadow variables to only a subset of parent object instances.

wrong preposition, s/to/for/ ..where???

Hi Bhaskar,

Thanks for spotting, I'd be happy with v2 as is or a v3 if you want to update s/shadow variables to only/shadow variables for only/ but knowing me, I probably repeated the same phrasing elsewhere. Up to you, thanks.

Acked-by: Joe Lawrence <joe.lawrence@xxxxxxxxxx>

-- Joe