Re: [PATCH] locking/lockdep: Revise Documentation/locking/crossrelease.txt

From: Byungchul Park
Date: Wed Nov 08 2017 - 19:24:02 EST


On Wed, Nov 08, 2017 at 10:34:38AM +0100, Ingo Molnar wrote:
>
> * Byungchul Park <byungchul.park@xxxxxxx> wrote:
>
> > I'm afraid the revision is not perfect yet. Of course, the document can
> > have got much better english by others than me.
> >
> > But,
> >
> > I think I should enhance it as much as I can, before they can help it
> > starting with a better one.
> >
> > In addition, I removed verboseness as much as possible.
> >
> > ----->8-----
> > From c7795104ca6ac6dd9f7fd944aee23a2011a6d3a2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
> > From: Byungchul Park <byungchul.park@xxxxxxx>
> > Date: Mon, 30 Oct 2017 14:51:26 +0900
> > Subject: [PATCH] locking/lockdep: Revise
> > Documentation/locking/crossrelease.txt
> >
> > The document should've been written with a better readability. Revise it
> > to enhance its readability.
> >
> > Signed-off-by: Byungchul Park <byungchul.park@xxxxxxx>
> > ---
> > Documentation/locking/crossrelease.txt | 388 +++++++++++++++------------------
>
> Could you please run a spellchecker over this text? It's still full of typos and
> various grammar mistakes...

Sure.. I have to.. I will look for a way and use it. Thanks a lot.

> Thanks,
>
> Ingo