Re: [PATCH] Documentation:Chinese translation of Documentation/arm64/legacy_instructions.txt

[Fu Wei]

Hi Amos Kong,
Great thanks for your review!
my feedback is inline below

On 03/26/2015 02:26 PM, Amos Kong wrote:
> On Wed, Mar 25, 2015 at 12:09:03PM +0800, wefu@xxxxxxxxxx wrote:
>> From: Fu Wei <wefu@xxxxxxxxxx>
>>
>> This is a Chinese translated version of Documentation/arm64/legacy_instructions.txt
>>
>> It is based on the modifications of Documentation/arm64/legacy_instructions.txt in submission:
>> "587064b6", "bd35a4ad", "2d888f48", "c852f320".
> 
> Hi Fu wei,
>  
>> Signed-off-by: Fu Wei <wefu@xxxxxxxxxx>
>> ---
>>  Documentation/zh_CN/arm64/legacy_instructions.txt | 72 +++++++++++++++++++++++
>>  1 file changed, 72 insertions(+)
>>
>> diff --git a/Documentation/zh_CN/arm64/legacy_instructions.txt b/Documentation/zh_CN/arm64/legacy_instructions.txt
>> new file mode 100644
>> index 0000000..75b11bf
>> --- /dev/null
>> +++ b/Documentation/zh_CN/arm64/legacy_instructions.txt
>> @@ -0,0 +1,72 @@
>> +Chinese translated version of Documentation/arm64/legacy_instructions.txt
>> +
>> +If you have any comment or update to the content, please contact the
>> +original document maintainer directly.  However, if you have a problem
>> +communicating in English you can also ask the Chinese maintainer for
>> +help.  Contact the Chinese maintainer if this translation is outdated
>> +or if there is a problem with the translation.
>> +
>> +Maintainer: Punit Agrawal <punit.agrawal@xxxxxxx>
>> +            Suzuki K. Poulose <suzuki.poulose@xxxxxxx>
>> +Chinese maintainer: Fu Wei <wefu@xxxxxxxxxx>
>> +---------------------------------------------------------------------
>> +Documentation/arm64/legacy_instructions.txt çäæçè
>> +
>> +åææèèæææææçååïèçæèçåææççæèãåæääçèæ
>> +äææåéçèïäåäåäæççæèæåãåææçèææäåææèç
>> +èååééïèèçäæççæèã
>> +
>> +ææçèæäæç Git æåçäï bc465aa9d045feb0e13b4a8f32cc33c1943f62d6
>> +
>> +èæççæèï Punit Agrawal <punit.agrawal@xxxxxxx>
>> +            Suzuki K. Poulose <suzuki.poulose@xxxxxxx>
>> +äæççæèï åç  Fu Wei <wefu@xxxxxxxxxx>
>> +äæççèèï åç  Fu Wei <wefu@xxxxxxxxxx>
>> +äæçæèèï åç  Fu Wei <wefu@xxxxxxxxxx>
>> +
>> +äääææ
>> +---------------------------------------------------------------------
>> +Linux åæå arm64 äççææääääåçææïäææææäæåèæææåååæäçæææèã
>> +èäåçææçäçäçæåäæäéåïhooksïæææææãåææäååïåäåèåçääåçèæäã
>> +
>> +æææååéèå sysctl èçï/proc/sys/abiïææåã
>> +äåçæèæåå sysctl èçççååïèéåäï
>> +
>> +* Undefïæåäï
>> +  åï 0
>> +  äçæåäæäçæååãåæéäææäåååçæäïå SWPïçéèåçæåã
>> +
>> +* Emulateïææï
>> +  åï 1
>> +  äçèäæææåãäèåèäèçééïèçæææäæåçäçæèèèçïåäååéçéåèåã
>> +  åæéäææäæåèææçæäïå CP15 barriersïéçæäïïçéèåçæåã
>> +
>> +* Hardware Executionïçäæèï
>> +  åï 2
>> +  èçæèäæåèææïäääåçåèæäçäæèèäæäçäè/ççæäã
>> +  äççäæèäèäææåçæèïäåæææéèèæåæèæææäçäççèææã
>> +
>> +éèæèæåäèäæäåææäçæãæåèææçæäåèäææïEmulateïääéèæåï
>> +èåååçæäåééèäçæåäïUndefïæå
>> +
>> +ææïæäææåèææååæææåãæåèæèåèåççæäæéã
>> +
>> +åææçéçæä
>> +-------------
>> +* SWP{B}
>> +èç: /proc/sys/abi/swp
>> +çæ: ååå
>> +éèæèæå: Undef (0)
>> +
>> +* CP15 Barriers
>> +èç: /proc/sys/abi/cp15_barrier
>> +çæ: æèææïäæèäç
>> +éèæèæå: Emulate (1)
>> +
>> +* SETEND
>> +èç: /proc/sys/abi/setend
>> +çæ: æèææïäæèäç
>> +éèæèæå: Emulate (1)*
>> +æïäääèèäçæïææççäç CPU åéå EL0 æææååèåã
> 
> raw content: All the cpus on the system 
> 
> Your translation might mean "CPUs on all the system", translating to 'ççäçææCPU' is better.

yes, you are right, will fix it in next version of patch.

> 
>> +åæääæç CPU ïäæææååèåï åäèèäçæåèçæåççï
>> +èåçååèåçäåéæççæã
> 
> 'èåç' 'the application' is not a specific application.
> 
> how about 'ååçäåèäåç....' ?
> 
Good! that is right translation, Thanks!

So the new patch will be sent in minutes.

More suggestions and advices are welcome and greatly appreciated.

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Best regards,

Fu Wei
Software Engineer
Red Hat Software (Beijing) Co.,Ltd.Shanghai Branch
Ph: +86 186 2020 4684 (mobile)
IRC: fuwei
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One Corporate Avenue,222 Hubin Road,Huangpu District,
Shanghai,China 200021 
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