Re: [PATCH 2/2] regulator: grammar fix in Kconfig

From: Michael Jones
Date: Thu Jul 26 2012 - 10:57:02 EST


On 07/26/2012 04:48 PM, Mark Brown wrote:
On Thu, Jul 26, 2012 at 04:07:24PM +0200, Michael Jones wrote:

- constraints then the regulator core will provide an always
- enabled dummy regulator will be provided, allowing consumer
- drivers to continue.
+ constraints, the regulator core will provide an always-
+ enabled dummy regulator, allowing consumer drivers to continue.

This appears to be making the grammar worse, it's just removing a "then"
and inserting, random commas which don't make, much sense.


What I was trying to fix was the double "provide" in "will provide an... will be provided." I agree that the if...then... was ugly, too.

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