Re: [PATCH] SElinux: Fix some typos.
From: James Morris
Date: Thu Jul 02 2009 - 18:57:18 EST
On Thu, 2 Jul 2009, Justin P. Mattock wrote:
> Signed-off-by: Justin P. Mattock <justinmattock@xxxxxxxxx>
>
> Fix some typos in some comments.
> -/* The file system's label must be initialized prior to use. */
> +/* The filesystems label must be initialized prior to use. */
Your adding grammertical error's.
> - * Note that the setting of hard limits (even to lower them) can be
> + * Note: That the setting of hard limits (even to lower them) can be
Please get this patch reviewed by an English speaker.
> * Description:
> * Call the NetLabel mechanism to get the security attributes of the given
> - * packet and use those attributes to determine the correct context/SID to
> - * assign to the packet. Returns zero on success, negative values on failure.
> + * packet and use those attributes to determine the correct context/SID to be
> + * assigned to the packet. Returns zero on success, negative values on failure.
Eschew the active voice?
- James
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James Morris
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